CaOmDaYn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[LARRY episode 2]

Amazing!

FINALLY! end well worth the wait :)

Graphics: Very well animated all around! It all looks polished and the lip syncing is as good as it gets. The characters show emotions to match their voices so well it looks like a professional piece of work! You are very skilled to make something look so detailed and move so smoothly, too. :) 3/3

Sound: Excellent voice acting from every character, their voices match their characters wonderfully! The soundtrack is perfectly in tune with everything and I am especially a fan of larry's theme! No complaints here either! 3/3

Execution: The story is original, its funny, it all works together well. the pacing of the episode feels right it doesn't go too fast nor does it feel like it is taking too long. Some of the parts, however, felt a little bit out of place and slow. The part where the assassin keeps missing his arrows and hitting something else was funny the first round, but as they were walking down the street and it was reused it almost felt to me as if there was lack of ideas for the scene and it was merely filler. I did laugh through the whole video, don't get me wrong. I just felt like some of the jokes here could have been better scripted at times. 2/3

One thing I would really like to point out to you is the repeating jokes from the first episode. Both have a point of extreme brutal humor (When Larry gets hit by the door in Ep. 1, and when Larry cuts off Pup's leg in Ep.2) and a point of extreme gross out humor (When Larry kisses his dad's head in Ep.1, and when the assassin coughs up his nuts in Ep.2). I understand the comedy in these extreme situations that you went for and I laughed hard every single time, but continuing to repeat this in later episodes will definitely start to wear out the charm they have and it will begin to feel more repetitive. You are far better at this than I will ever be, just thought I would let you know how I felt :)

Overall this is an amazing series and gets the extra point for a great story, amazing graphics and sound, and funny scenes even if they became repetitive at times. Keep it up man I will be waiting every day for the announcement of Larry Episode 3 in the far future :) 9/10

[Duairt Eittle Episode 16]

Hm...

Graphics: Not your worst, but still really ugly. The animation is simple and uninspired. you seem like you think graphics don't matter, and in a sense they do not, but they really would help your scores and ups the quality of your work, rather than having it look like it was made 5 years ago. 0/3

Sound: You had a good choice in music at times, but it feels as tho the tracks are being constantly repeated in each animation you do. Otherwise there are very few sound effects and that noise Duairt or whatever it is makes gets annoying. 1/3

Execution: ONE big improvement I very much enjoyed was that I didn't have to click each time their was dialogue to move forward. You spaced the text out enough so I didn't feel like I was rushed to read it, but I also didn't have to wait long periods for it to pass, and for that i give you points good timing. Otherwise the story really didn't go anywhere, and it wasn't very funny at any given point. I did like the gordon scene but it still wasn't anything too special. 2/3

Overall you are getting better but there is still nothing too special about this, so here is my advice. You say it only took a few days to do, well try spending much more time than that on a project. Polish the graphics and make it look like there is more to the animation than simple tweens. Think of a structured story that can be enjoyed by many people rather than a select few and take the time writing the script for it. You have the potential to make a good animation, you just need to spend more time and effort on them, that's all. 3/10

VioletVulpine responds:

Once again, I don't give two shits about graphics.
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[Inside the mind of Craig]

Awesome!

Graphics: Absolutely beautiful! you did an amazing job drawing every little detail to the point that the bland stick figures were not even noticeable by the end of it. 3/3

Sound: Very creepily insane and moody, the entire time I felt just a little bit more demented from watching it and the sound was used perfectly in every way. 3/3

Execution: An awesomely demented flash that was very unique! I did feel like at some points it was nothing but people getting shot in the head, which became a bit annoying. other than that good job! 2/3

Overall this is incredibly unique and a great flash! Anybody who voted this below a 4 is half retarded, and for that you get the extra point :)
9/10

[LARRY episode 1]

Brilliant!

Graphics: Very beautiful graphics with very few flaws! Everything looks medieval as it should and the lip syncing is spot on! Nothing wrong here. 3/3

Sound: The voices are great, funny, the music good, sound effects are perfect... you obviously spent ALOT of time and effort on this and made every bit of it worth it! 3/3

Execution: The story line is intriguing, the comedy was great, great replayability, there are not many pieces of work like this on the site. Its up with the best of the best and deserves that spot! 3/3

Overall it is amazing. If you are reading this review before you watch it you are stupid and need to go watch it NOW! extra point for being an absolutely stunning piece of work! Well done Jazza! :)

[Link Misses His Target]

Very funny, awesome flash!

Graphics: Were great! you did a great amount of detail in ever part of your flash it was all very pleasant to look at. 3/4

Sound: All the sound effects and music were spot on, Navi has never been more annoying :P 3/3

Execution: The flash was really funny, every time he shot I kept thinking if he would shoot Navi or not. The fact that you never did and kept me interested through the entire video earns you the extra point! Good job! :D

DannyP responds:

wel ty (-:

[The Copy Ninja's Return]

Pretty good animation! Sound needs work

Graphics: I thought you did a very detailed job with all the characters. The animation is clunky at times but the action was actually pretty good! 3/3

Sound: The Naruto music is always a good thing, but I felt like the voice acting could use some work. Some parts were not bad but others felt really weak. Even so, I loved how you made all the sound effects it added some comedy to it! Another thing you probably would like to make sure of next time is that the dialogue is louder than the music. The subtitles saved it from being too annoying but it would still be a lot better if the music was simple ambiance rather than overpowering. 1/3

Execution: The story was a little questionable but funny! The idea that they were going through all of this for just an ipod was enough to get good laughs out of it. Everything felt like it was moving a little slow at times, however. 2/3

Overall this was a very well done flash even if the sound could use some work. It was a very unique and funny story that I really did enjoy watching! For this special uniqueness in it and the amount of detail you put into the characters, I'm giving you the extra point :) Can't wait to see more from you you definently have great potential!

DannyP responds:

I thought I had the voices loud enough, but maybe I was just crazy since they were extra quiet while it was still in the making. I'll try to keep the background music more... in the background next time I do something. I couldn't yell into my quality of microphone, so that held my voices back a bit... but yeah, I just got impatient waiting on people since no one seemed interested in doing voices. I thought three inactive audition request topics was enough to give up on that.

Not sure how to solve the slow plot... Then again, I wrote this thing over three years ago and didn't really change the script at all, so maybe I could just plain write better now. I wasn't too thrilled about the project, anyway. Good to see you caught a more subtle side of it, though. I was just sorta expecting people to forget the whole commotion was for an affordable piece of technology.

Thanks for the critique, good sir.

[Duairt Eittle Episode 15]

Wow.... Really bad

Graphics: Yuck... I really don't know wat to say besides its ugly. 0/3

Sound: The music is misplaces, lack of voice work besides the robotic sounding voices that aren't even used in a good or well timed matter, and repeating sound effects that get really annoying really fast. 0/3

Execution: Its not funny, its not cool to watch, its not anything besides junk and as far as i'm concerned, better off marked as spam. 0/3

Overall I haven't seen something so bad in a long time. If you are reading this review people, do NOT watch! Waste ur time elsewhere!

VioletVulpine responds:

I'll execute you and your family

[Dr. Mario with Lyrics]

Oh wait... Im wrong... You have... Crabs!

Graphics: I dunno why but I noticed mario's outline and the color just bugged me for some reason, but otherwise the animation was great! lyp synching and everything was spot on. 3/3

Sound: This song... is awesome! I found it to be very catchy with some good matching lyrics. I actually found myself humming this to myself at work today so it is definitely re-watchable many times! 3/3

Execution: I loved the lyrics and the drawings too were all incredibly hilarious. Anybody who doesn't find this at least amusing is truly dead on the inside

I would really love to see more flashes like this one from you, It was very clever and catchy! Im giving you the extra point to make it a 10 :)

[If Spider-Man was Real]

Meh

Graphics: very ugly to look at I was not impressed in any sense by them 0/3

Sound: The sound quality was pretty poor and not many sound effects used at all. 1/

Execution: I was a fan of the joke at the end and when he opens the locket ha. But overall I felt like it was all over too soon. 2/3

[In The Dark Trailer]

Hellish, Funny, and everything else great!

Graphics: I thought you did a great job with the animation! Everything moved pretty naturally. The drawings were amazing, they truly look as hellish as they could possibly be. I love the satirical dark hell look to it, I feel like when this comes out I am truley going to enjoy it! 3/3

Sound: The trailer had a great song that matched the dark comedic atmosphere perfectly! I wasn't expecting any sound effects from the trailer and even without them it was still great. 3/3

Execution: Although only a preview, the humor was great. the absolute brutality of some of the scenes makes me only want more! Everything fit together perfectly. 3/3

Overall I am going to add you to my fav authors because I want to be there right when the series is posted in the future :) the preview really did a good job of grabbing my attention and keeping me interested. for that I give you another point for the 10 :)

Comick responds:

Whoo! Thanks man! :D I appreciate the detailed review and I'm glad it kept your interest!