CaOmDaYn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Stare Dad: Waffles]

Would have been alot funnier with some actual voice acting.

just2pale responds:

I agree

[Quest of the Manwhore]

Amazing!

absolutely wonderful! I loved everything the animation, the humor, the catchy lyrics, it was probably better than the first one! Well done!

Sexual-Lobster responds:

thanks!

[ABC Happy Time]

Amazing!

Graphics: Pretty decent, everything looks good and the lip syncing is spot on. Nothing incredibly special tho, and the movement are a bit stiff. 2/3

Sound: Amazing voice work, lots of energy and good acting. I loved it :)

Execution: The song is absolutely hilarious! I downloaded it on Itunes just before I started writing this, there are very few things that can make me laugh out loud literally, but this managed to do so. So props to you :)

Overall this was amazing in terms of hilarity. I don't feel as tho it is the most original piece in the world, but it made me laugh enough to forget about that anyways. Therefore you get the extra point :)

P.S. 19.8 MB?!?!? maybe cut down on that a bit it doesn't bother me too much but I see some people are reviewing it down a bit because of that. It is definitely a ridiculous size haha.

Jonnyethco responds:

Yup. I don't work in Flash so I have to compress my video. Video is inherently larger than a regular flash file. Luckily Tom was nice enough to increase my upload limit so I can share my insanity with Newgrounds. :D

[RHG: Shift, Demo 2]

yuck

short, pointless, badly drawn, mediocre animation... i would be suprised if this passed.

OrangeXrush responds:

Short, because its a demo. Can you read?
Pointless, how? It's to show his skills for something on FluidAnims.
Badly Drawn, yes, maybe it is, but I'm still getting back into flash.
Mediocre Animation, maybe, because I'm still learning how to smooth things out.

Before you write a reply, do some research. Oh, and don't judge people badly if you don't even have one submission, k?

Thanks.

[Duairt Eittle Episode 17]

nice!

Not gonna lie, i actually found this to be funny. When he said "to show respect, i will take a reflective walk.... meh, fuck it" I actually did laugh out loud. A little late for halloween, but thats ok :)

VioletVulpine responds:

Wha... a 9!?? Why Thank you! :D

[Duairt Eittle Episode 16]

Hm...

Graphics: Not your worst, but still really ugly. The animation is simple and uninspired. you seem like you think graphics don't matter, and in a sense they do not, but they really would help your scores and ups the quality of your work, rather than having it look like it was made 5 years ago. 0/3

Sound: You had a good choice in music at times, but it feels as tho the tracks are being constantly repeated in each animation you do. Otherwise there are very few sound effects and that noise Duairt or whatever it is makes gets annoying. 1/3

Execution: ONE big improvement I very much enjoyed was that I didn't have to click each time their was dialogue to move forward. You spaced the text out enough so I didn't feel like I was rushed to read it, but I also didn't have to wait long periods for it to pass, and for that i give you points good timing. Otherwise the story really didn't go anywhere, and it wasn't very funny at any given point. I did like the gordon scene but it still wasn't anything too special. 2/3

Overall you are getting better but there is still nothing too special about this, so here is my advice. You say it only took a few days to do, well try spending much more time than that on a project. Polish the graphics and make it look like there is more to the animation than simple tweens. Think of a structured story that can be enjoyed by many people rather than a select few and take the time writing the script for it. You have the potential to make a good animation, you just need to spend more time and effort on them, that's all. 3/10

VioletVulpine responds:

Once again, I don't give two shits about graphics.
hate MikeyS9607

PS. Stop stalking us

[Link Misses His Target]

Very funny, awesome flash!

Graphics: Were great! you did a great amount of detail in ever part of your flash it was all very pleasant to look at. 3/4

Sound: All the sound effects and music were spot on, Navi has never been more annoying :P 3/3

Execution: The flash was really funny, every time he shot I kept thinking if he would shoot Navi or not. The fact that you never did and kept me interested through the entire video earns you the extra point! Good job! :D

DannyP responds:

wel ty (-:

[The Copy Ninja's Return]

Pretty good animation! Sound needs work

Graphics: I thought you did a very detailed job with all the characters. The animation is clunky at times but the action was actually pretty good! 3/3

Sound: The Naruto music is always a good thing, but I felt like the voice acting could use some work. Some parts were not bad but others felt really weak. Even so, I loved how you made all the sound effects it added some comedy to it! Another thing you probably would like to make sure of next time is that the dialogue is louder than the music. The subtitles saved it from being too annoying but it would still be a lot better if the music was simple ambiance rather than overpowering. 1/3

Execution: The story was a little questionable but funny! The idea that they were going through all of this for just an ipod was enough to get good laughs out of it. Everything felt like it was moving a little slow at times, however. 2/3

Overall this was a very well done flash even if the sound could use some work. It was a very unique and funny story that I really did enjoy watching! For this special uniqueness in it and the amount of detail you put into the characters, I'm giving you the extra point :) Can't wait to see more from you you definently have great potential!

DannyP responds:

I thought I had the voices loud enough, but maybe I was just crazy since they were extra quiet while it was still in the making. I'll try to keep the background music more... in the background next time I do something. I couldn't yell into my quality of microphone, so that held my voices back a bit... but yeah, I just got impatient waiting on people since no one seemed interested in doing voices. I thought three inactive audition request topics was enough to give up on that.

Not sure how to solve the slow plot... Then again, I wrote this thing over three years ago and didn't really change the script at all, so maybe I could just plain write better now. I wasn't too thrilled about the project, anyway. Good to see you caught a more subtle side of it, though. I was just sorta expecting people to forget the whole commotion was for an affordable piece of technology.

Thanks for the critique, good sir.

[Duairt Eittle Episode 15]

Wow.... Really bad

Graphics: Yuck... I really don't know wat to say besides its ugly. 0/3

Sound: The music is misplaces, lack of voice work besides the robotic sounding voices that aren't even used in a good or well timed matter, and repeating sound effects that get really annoying really fast. 0/3

Execution: Its not funny, its not cool to watch, its not anything besides junk and as far as i'm concerned, better off marked as spam. 0/3

Overall I haven't seen something so bad in a long time. If you are reading this review people, do NOT watch! Waste ur time elsewhere!

VioletVulpine responds:

I'll execute you and your family

[In The Dark Trailer]

Hellish, Funny, and everything else great!

Graphics: I thought you did a great job with the animation! Everything moved pretty naturally. The drawings were amazing, they truly look as hellish as they could possibly be. I love the satirical dark hell look to it, I feel like when this comes out I am truley going to enjoy it! 3/3

Sound: The trailer had a great song that matched the dark comedic atmosphere perfectly! I wasn't expecting any sound effects from the trailer and even without them it was still great. 3/3

Execution: Although only a preview, the humor was great. the absolute brutality of some of the scenes makes me only want more! Everything fit together perfectly. 3/3

Overall I am going to add you to my fav authors because I want to be there right when the series is posted in the future :) the preview really did a good job of grabbing my attention and keeping me interested. for that I give you another point for the 10 :)

Comick responds:

Whoo! Thanks man! :D I appreciate the detailed review and I'm glad it kept your interest!